#CoverPageTakesTheSpotlight

I'm back and better than ever before!!!

Last night, I asked my sister (who took this class by the way) what her thoughts on my magazine were. She suggested that I change my cover page. I was kind of relieved because my cover page had the least amount of work put in to it. "Least" being a relative term because compared to my other pages, which I spent hours on, I probably spent about 30 minutes total on my cover page. Anyways, this was what I had originally:

My sister suggested I center the title and make it bigger. I took those suggestions into consideration and changed it. Today, however, I asked my teacher what she thought of the changes and showed her the before (seen above) and after shot. My teacher said she agreed with my sister but gave me a whole lot more to do with it and ways to make it even better and here is what I did to it:

I did SO MUCH to it! I moved the sell line, added cover lines, centered the text more, and put Idy in the left third making the picture look more aesthetic. I also made the picture a closeup instead of a mid-shot. This was suggested by my teacher because it allows the audience to connect with the subject more by being able to see more facial expressions. Side note: this was not intended, but my cover line involving makeup rhymes! I was so surprised I did that with out intending to!

And with that, I finished the final draft of my magazine! Now all that's left is to have someone proofread it (I don't want ANY mistakes!) and to record my CCR! I've answered all the questions provided to us by my teacher and I'm on my way to developing a script, but I plan to be recording on Friday! Which means I'll have this project a WHOLE DAY EARLY!!! I'm so proud of all I've done with this project! Even my teacher said at the beginning of this year I wasn't the best, but now I "flying around [the] screen!"

And with that happy note, I'm signing off for now! Bye!💫